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sādhubhiḥ ślaghyaṁ phalaṁ yasya tathā-bhūte yuddha-dāna-dayā-dharma-rūpe karmaṇi stheyasī sthiratarā tvarā-yuktā mānasāsaktir utsāhaḥ ||
sādhubhiḥ ślaghyaṁ phalaṁ yasyawhose fruit is praiseworthy in the eyes of the good bahuvrīhi unpacked as a relative clause, describing karmaṇiजिस (कर्म) का फल सज्जनों के द्वारा प्रशंसनीय है
tathā-bhūte yuddha-dāna-dayā-dharma-rūpe karmaṇion an act of just that kind, taking the form of the dharmas of fighting, giving, and compassion locative naming the object; tathā-bhūte ties back to the praiseworthy-fruit clauseऐसे — युद्ध, दान, दया रूप धर्मवाले — कर्म में
stheyasī sthiratarā'steadiest' — that is, very firm Viśvanātha glosses the verse's superlative stheyasī with the comparative sthiratarā, softening it to 'very firm'स्थेयसी अर्थात् अत्यन्त स्थिर (श्लोक के श्रेष्ठतावाचक 'स्थेयसी' को यहाँ तुलनात्मक 'स्थिरतर' से समझाकर 'बहुत स्थिर' कर दिया)
tvarā-yuktājoined with speed — i.e. the verse's 'satvarā'त्वरा (शीघ्रता) से युक्त
mānasī āsaktiḥ utsāhaḥa mental attachment [of this sort] is utsāhaमन की आसक्ति ही उत्साह है
sādhubhiḥ ślaghyaṁ phalaṁ yasya tathā-bhūte yuddha-dāna-dayā-dharma-rūpe karmaṇi — on an act whose fruit the good praise, taking the form of fighting, giving, and compassion; stheyasī sthiratarā tvarā-yuktā mānasī āsaktiḥ — a very firm, speed-joined mental attachment; utsāhaḥ — is utsāha
sādhubhiḥ ślaghyaṁ phalaṁ yasya — जिसका फल सज्जनों से प्रशंसनीय है; tathā-bhūte yuddha-dāna-dayā-dharma-rūpe karmaṇi — ऐसे युद्ध-दान-दया रूप धर्मवाले कर्म में; stheyasī sthiratarā — स्थेयसी, अर्थात् अत्यन्त स्थिर; tvarā-yuktā — शीघ्रता से युक्त; mānasī āsaktiḥ utsāhaḥ — मन की आसक्ति ही उत्साह।
Viśvanātha restates the definition in plain apposition. The act is one whose result the good would praise, and it takes the shape of the three dharmas — fighting, charity, compassion. Toward it there is a mental attachment that is very firm and, at the same time, quick to move. That, he says, is utsāha. He reads the verse's 'stheyasī' as 'sthiratarā', very firm, and its 'satvarā' as 'tvarā-yuktā', joined with speed.
जिसका फल सज्जनों के द्वारा प्रशंसनीय हो, ऐसे युद्ध, दान और दया रूप धर्मवाले कर्म में जो अत्यन्त स्थिर एवं शीघ्रता से युक्त मन की आसक्ति है, वही उत्साह है।