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suvadane iti śrī-kṛṣṇa-vākyam |
suvadane itithe verse beginning 'suvadane' iti marks the pratīka, the opening catch-word standing for the whole verse'सुवदने' इत्यादि (यह प्रतीक-पद पूरे श्लोक का सूचक है)
śrī-kṛṣṇa-vākyamis spoken by Śrī Kṛṣṇaश्रीकृष्ण का वचन है
suvadane iti śrī-kṛṣṇa-vākyam — the 'suvadane' verse is Kṛṣṇa's speech
'सुवदने' इत्यादि श्रीकृष्ण का वचन है
Viśvanātha first fixes who is speaking: the 'suvadane' verse is Kṛṣṇa's own words. He is the one praising Rādhā's speech.
'सुवदने' से आरम्भ होने वाला यह श्लोक श्रीकृष्ण का कथन है।
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sausvaryeṇa kokilasya śabdārtha-vaicitryā sudhāyāś ca vaiyarthyam uktam ||
sausvaryeṇaby [Rādhā's] sweet, well-toned voice instrumental of meansमधुर स्वर के द्वारा
kokilasyaof the cuckoo — whose uselessness genitive, going with vaiyarthyamकोयल की (व्यर्थता के साथ अन्वय)
śabdārtha-vaicitryāand by the marvel of her words and their meaning instrumental (irregular for vaicitryeṇa); śabda 'word' + artha 'sense' + vaicitrya 'wonderful variety'शब्द और अर्थ की विचित्रता के द्वारा
sudhāyāḥ caand of the nectar genitive, also going with vaiyarthyamऔर अमृत की (व्यर्थता के साथ अन्वय)
vaiyarthyamthe uselessness, the being-in-vainव्यर्थता
uktamis what the verse is statingकही गई है
sausvaryeṇa kokilasya [vaiyarthyam], śabdārtha-vaicitryā ca sudhāyāḥ vaiyarthyam uktam — by [her] sweet tone the cuckoo's uselessness, and by the marvel of word-and-meaning the nectar's uselessness, is declared
मधुर स्वर के द्वारा कोयल की, और शब्द-अर्थ की विचित्रता के द्वारा अमृत की व्यर्थता कही गई है
Viśvanātha splits the praise into two lines of attack. By the sweetness of her tone, the cuckoo is made useless — sound beaten by sound. And by the marvel of her words and their meaning, nectar is made useless — for nectar is merely sweet to taste, it carries no word and no sense. So her speech beats the cuckoo at pure melody and beats nectar by having meaning as well. Each rival is outdone on its own ground.
मधुर स्वर से कोयल की, और शब्द तथा अर्थ की विचित्रता से अमृत की व्यर्थता कही गई है।
Source 'vaicitryā' is an irregular instrumental for the expected vaicitryeṇa; read parallel to sausvaryeṇa.